2011年5月28日 星期六

Expressing an Opinion--(2)

There are more and more nuclear power plants built around the world.  However, since the explosion of nuclear power plants in Japan, it is considered whether this sort of energies will still be used to generate electricity.  Despite the fact that nuclear power is one of the most imperative sources which provide electrical energy, I think that it is better to decrease the application of nuclear power.  First of all, the water discharged from plants will lead to heat pollution, which leads to the destruction of marine ecology.  Temperature undersea is so overheated that creatures are dead.  Another reason is radiation leaks.  Because of the potential nuclear meltdowns, radiation leaks out and causes humans to get cancers and pregnant women to give birth to deformity babies.  Finally, nuclear waste store will occupy the space on small islands. Many people are protesting for this issue in order to have an unpolluted and healthy environment.  It is for all the above-mentioned reasons that I believe it appropriate to forbid the nuclear power generation and I suggest finding other natural resources for electric power.

5 則留言:

  1. 真的很厲害欸妳是寫作天才嗎!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  2. 你可不可以老實一點的當學藝不要去搶蔡孟庭的小老師

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  3. 還是很長,但是還是很流暢!

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  4. 找不到錯誤好沒成就感:(

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  5. 第六行跟第七行重複用了lead to 其中一個可以換一下喔!

    諦諦這篇真的寫的很贊耶~ ~
    不但用了一些比較難的字詞,而且我喜歡你一開始的描述,用日本的情況來輔證自己的論點,使自己的立場更堅定!!
    就如同薏靜說的....(但你現在是圖書股長,嘻嘻嘻~)
    諦諦你不要跟我搶飯碗拉~
    這樣我好有壓力唷~ ~
    看來...我得更認真才行了....

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