I'm seeking for a new English instructor for my school and I received two resumes from people applying for this job. One of the applicants is Lynn Whitnall and the other is Debra Fines. After viewing these resumes, perhaps I will choose Debra Fines to hire. There are some reasons following. First of all, compared Lynn Whitnall with Debra Fines in education, Debra is more professional in English than Lynn, who studies in Spanish only. Second, Debra has more than eighteen-year employment experience while Lynn has only fourteen years. Therefore, Debra is more experienced than Lynn . Moreover, although Lynn has ability of the fluency in many languages, such as Spanish, French and Japanese, Debra is more professional than Lynn in English. Last, Lynn Whitnall doesn’t have any publication, whereas Debra Fines once published a book about English in 2006. Above these wherefores are why I prefer employing Debra Fines to Lynn Whitnall.
One of the applicants is Lynn Whitnall and the other is Debra Fines.這句的兩個人名是不是該用所有格代名詞?
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寫的很好!
覺得句型有很多都是more..than..
回覆刪除可以換一下!!
其他的都OK
而且都寫的很順!!
你有四個more than要不要換一下
回覆刪除After viewing these resumes~我覺得用view有點怪耶~
回覆刪除我喜歡你最後一句的用法!!
我也覺得viewing有點怪~換一個吧!
回覆刪除其他都很讚喔!