My friend and I are surfing the Internet to look for some information about student housing, and finally we find out two apartments suitable for us. One is Fairfax Apartments and the other is CAMPUS APTS. Each of them has so many qualities and preferential promotions that we have no immediate decision that which one we will choose. Therefore, we make some comparisons about the two apartments below:
Compared Fairfax Apartments with CAMPUS APTS, Fairfax Apartments has two large bedrooms, whereas CAMPUS APTS has only one. The former has larger and more bedrooms than the latter. Next, Fairfax Apartments offers air conditioners but CAMPUS APTS doesn’t. Fairfax Apartments has house-furnished service. On the other hand, CAMPUS APTS doesn’t provide furniture decoration. In addition, CAMPUS APTS allows students who keep pets such as dogs and cats to live in its apartment, which is different from Fairfax Apartments. Finally, the rental price of CAMPUS APTS is much cheaper than Fairfax Apartments. Fairfax Apartments costs 1250 dollars for rent. However, we will spend only 900 dollars per month if living at CAMPUS APTS. Above these comparisons, perhaps we will choose Fairfax Apartments. Although it is more expensive than CAMPUS APTS, it contains larger room space and complete facilities and it’s our ideal apartment.
surfing the Internet 中間應該要有on喔!
回覆刪除larger room space 應該要加冠詞a 或者the
寫的不錯!!
我絕得錢前面加NT$比較好
回覆刪除細節有注意到寫的很棒:)
寫的很好~有些句子都用特別的字詞連結起來欸很厲害:D
回覆刪除我覺得surf the Net不需要on
上網本來就是surf the Net而已所以靜諦應該沒錯!
出現好多次 CAMPUS APTS 和Fairfax Apartments
回覆刪除要不要用代名詞替換一下
其他都好順喔!不愧是阿諦諦~崇拜妳~~~