2011年5月25日 星期三

Expressing an Opinion--(1)

  I am on the same page when it comes to that if students should wear school uniforms.  To begin with, dressed in uniforms, students can be easily recognized their identities.  It is also facile for the police to track where they are when they are wandering outside or committing mistakes.  Furthermore, they don’t have to worry about what sort of clothes they will wear today and tomorrow, which brings about the waste of time in choosing a variety of colorful clothes.  In addition, it reflects the good atmosphere in this school and keeps campus in order.  Students show their unity and unanimity by wearing uniforms.  Last but not the least, as people will be engaged in their work in the future, they must put on their company’s uniform.  We can be familiar with the formation of uniforms in advance.  In light of all the points mentioned, one must conclude that it is appropriate to let students wear uniforms.

6 則留言:

  1. 你總是可以寫很多,也可以寫的很正確!!

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  2. 每次都超通順沒缺點可挑-3-

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  3. 要是我的大便有你文章一半的通順我說不定就不會是現在這樣了...

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  4. 1.facile我再麥克米倫和Cambridge都只有查到"草率的"而沒有"容易的"意思耶~
    2.committing mistakes好像不對唷~
    make mistakes 或commit errors你是要寫哪個呢?
    3.unity,unanimity兩個字的意思一樣八~留一個就好了
    4.with the formation of uniforms 有查過用法ㄇ?改絕有點怪...

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  5. 最後一點會不會有點不夠力的感覺
    因為很多公司也可以不用穿制服阿!
    純屬個人意見啦!
    整篇文章寫的很讚喔!

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