Expressing an Opinion--(2)

There are more and more nuclear power plants built around the world.  However, since the explosion of nuclear power plants in Japan, it is considered whether this sort of energies will still be used to generate electricity.  Despite the fact that nuclear power is one of the most imperative sources which provide electrical energy, I think that it is better to decrease the application of nuclear power.  First of all, the water discharged from plants will lead to heat pollution, which leads to the destruction of marine ecology.  Temperature undersea is so overheated that creatures are dead.  Another reason is radiation leaks.  Because of the potential nuclear meltdowns, radiation leaks out and causes humans to get cancers and pregnant women to give birth to deformity babies.  Finally, nuclear waste store will occupy the space on small islands. Many people are protesting for this issue in order to have an unpolluted and healthy environment.  It is for all the above-mentioned reasons that I believe it appropriate to forbid the nuclear power generation and I suggest finding other natural resources for electric power.

Expressing an Opinion--(1)

  I am on the same page when it comes to that if students should wear school uniforms.  To begin with, dressed in uniforms, students can be easily recognized their identities.  It is also facile for the police to track where they are when they are wandering outside or committing mistakes.  Furthermore, they don’t have to worry about what sort of clothes they will wear today and tomorrow, which brings about the waste of time in choosing a variety of colorful clothes.  In addition, it reflects the good atmosphere in this school and keeps campus in order.  Students show their unity and unanimity by wearing uniforms.  Last but not the least, as people will be engaged in their work in the future, they must put on their company’s uniform.  We can be familiar with the formation of uniforms in advance.  In light of all the points mentioned, one must conclude that it is appropriate to let students wear uniforms.

Comparing--(2) John Adams and Tomas Jefferson－revised

  There are several similarities between the two significant people, John Adams and Tomas Jefferson.  First of all, they died on the same date, July 4, 1826.  Second, they were both of central importance to the American Revolution.  Third, John Adams was a delegate to the Continental Congress, and Thomas Jefferson was, too.  Next, they once assumed signers of  Declaration of Independence.  In addition, John studied and practiced law,and so did Thomas.  Finally, the two people had ever occupied the President of United States.  John Adams and Tomas Jefferson have done so many the same things that I couldn't believe it is just a coincidence.

Comparing--(1) Lourie's and Green's－revised

  The advertisement of Lourie's has identical contents to that of Green's.  In the first place, both Lourie's and Green's sell ladies hoodies.  Next, the clothes of Lourie's can be washed by machines.  Likewise, the ladies hoodies of Green's are also machine washable.  In addition,the quality of clothes between Lourie's and Green's is the same－blend cotton .  Moreover, they have the same sizes of clothes, from 4 to 14.  Lourie's offers four colors of the clothes, red, navy, white and green, and Green's provides these colors as well.  Lastly, prices of the clothes are equivalent in the two stores. Both of them only cost 34.99 dollars.  After viewing the two stores' introductions, I have no idea which one to choose because each of them is nearly similar.

Contrasting--(2)

I'm seeking for a new English instructor for my school and I received two resumes from people applying for this job.  One of the applicants is Lynn Whitnall and the other is Debra Fines.  After viewing these resumes, perhaps I will choose Debra Fines to hire.  There are some reasons following.  First of all, compared Lynn Whitnall with Debra Fines in education, Debra is more professional in English than Lynn, who studies in Spanish only.  Second, Debra has more than eighteen-year employment experience while Lynn has only fourteen years.  Therefore, Debra is more experienced than Lynn.  Moreover, although Lynn has ability of the fluency in many languages, such as Spanish, French and Japanese, Debra is more professional than Lynn in English.  Last, Lynn Whitnall doesn’t have any publication, whereas Debra Fines once published a book about English in 2006.  Above these wherefores are why I prefer employing Debra Fines to Lynn Whitnall.

Contrasting--(1)

  My friend and I are surfing the Internet to look for some information about student housing, and finally we find out two apartments suitable for us.  One is Fairfax Apartments and the other is CAMPUS APTS.  Each of them has so many qualities and preferential promotions that we have no immediate decision that which one we will choose.  Therefore, we make some comparisons about the two apartments below:

  Compared Fairfax Apartments with CAMPUS APTS, Fairfax Apartments has two large bedrooms, whereas CAMPUS APTS has only one.  The former has larger and more bedrooms than the latter.  Next, Fairfax Apartments offers air conditioners but CAMPUS APTS doesn’t.  Fairfax Apartments has house-furnished service.  On the other hand, CAMPUS APTS doesn’t provide furniture decoration.  In addition, CAMPUS APTS allows students who keep pets such as dogs and cats to live in its apartment, which is different from Fairfax Apartments.  Finally, the rental price of CAMPUS APTS is much cheaper than Fairfax Apartments.  Fairfax Apartments costs 1250 dollars for rent. However, we will spend only 900 dollars per month if living at CAMPUS APTS.  Above these comparisons, perhaps we will choose Fairfax Apartments.  Although it is more expensive than CAMPUS APTS, it contains larger room space and complete facilities and it’s our ideal apartment.

Comparing--(3)

  Shelly and Cherry, my two younger sisters, are one year old apart.  However, their appearances, characters and habits are similar.  First of all, they both have big eyes, long black hair, and slim figure.  Many people usually take them as twins.  Second, Cherry has the same interests as Shelly in reading, especially comic books and novels.  Shelly likes to play online games or watch cartoons on the website, and so does Cherry.  Besides, Shelly as well as Cherry loves chatting with people they can talk to.  They often get together and keep talking anytime and anywhere even when I am studying.  What is more, both of them are addicted to playing a trick on their youngest sister.  They regard that as a pastime.  Their characteristics are almost the same that I usually mix up and even scarcely recognize who is Shelly and who is Cherry.

Giving Reasons -- My favorite season－revised

  Among four seasons in a year, it is spring that I like the most.  There are several reasons below.  First of all, the weather in spring is warm and sunny, and the temperature is moderate.  Sometimes it is comfortable when the wind blows on my face.  Second, a variety of colorful flowers are in full bloom, the grass turns green, and trees bud new leaves.  These sights form an impressive view and overflow with vigour.  Furthermore, it makes me relaxed and delighted when seeing such insects as butterflies and bees flying everywhere, being busy in extracting honey from blossomy flowers, and listening to birds singing on branches.  Finally, spring is usually defined as " a new start of a year ".  We examine what we had done in the past year and improve ourselves to have a restart in an initial stage of a year.  Above the wherefores are why I am fascinated with spring.