Of four seasons in a year, it is spring that I like the most. There are several reasons below. First of all, the weather in spring is warm and sunny, and the temperature is moderate. Sometimes it is comfortable when the wind blows on my face. Second, a variety of colorful flowers are in full bloom, the grass turns green, and trees bud new leaves. These sights form an impressive view and overflow with vigour. Furthermore, it makes me relaxed and delighted when seeing such insects as butterflies and bees flying everywhere, being busy in extracting honey from blossomy flowers, and listening to birds singing on branches. Finally, spring is usually defined as " a new start of a year ". We examine what we had done in the past year and improve ourselves to have a restart in an initial stage of a year. Above the wherefores are why I am fascinated with spring.
不管是開頭、主體還是結尾,都超有水準的!!
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寫的很好!!!
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你應該真的很愛春天因為寫得太好了連我都愛上春天了~~~~
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寫的好讚!!
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真是厲害!!
好多字都看不懂ㄋㄟ~用辭超厲害
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