The advertisement of Lourie's has identical contents to that of Green's. In the first place, both Lourie's and Green's sell ladies hoodies. Next, the clothes of Lourie's can be washed by machines. Likewise, the ladies hoodies of Green's are also machine washable. In addition, the quality of clothes cotton blend between Lourie's and Green's. Moreover, they have the same sizes of clothes, from 4 to 14. Lourie's offers four colors of the clothes, red, navy, white and green, and Green's provides these colors as well. Lastly, prices of the clothes are equivalent in the two stores. Both of them only cost 34.99 dollars.
In addition, the quality of clothes cotton blend between Lourie's and Green's. (這句沒有動詞喔)
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回覆刪除In addition, the quality of clothes cotton blend between Lourie's and Green's.這句似乎沒動詞
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In addition, the quality of clothes cotton blend between Lourie's and Green's.沒打完嗎?少了點什麼~
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In addition, the quality of clothes cotton blend between Lourie's and Green's.
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