About two weeks ago, my mother ran an important business at one o'clock in Kaoshung. But from that time until now, she has been missing there and I still can't get news about her. Please help me to search for her. Her name is Yao, about forty-six years old. She is medium height but a little plump. There are some freckles on her cheek, and she wears glass. Then she has a short, curly black hair and big brown eyes. Besides, she has dark skin. She is dressed in white shirt and black skirt, and carried a red handbag when she was missing. If someone sees her, please call me immediately. My name is Rae, and my phone number is 09-12356894. Thanks a lot !
第六行第一個字"glass"是杯子喔
回覆刪除眼鏡是glasses =D
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She is dressed in white shirt and black skirt, and carried a red handbag when she was missing.
前面現在式後面過去式...要不要統一???
句子最後的"was missing"有點怪
要不要改成"was gone"???
Please help me to search for her. (help 後面不加to)
回覆刪除高雄拼錯了應該是Kaohsiung哦~
回覆刪除She is dressed in ~she was missing.要不要都改過去式?
回覆刪除glass改glasses
回覆刪除She is dressed in white shirt and black skirt, and carried a red handbag when she was missing.要不要都改過去式啊?
應該是glasses才對
回覆刪除其他應該沒有什麼錯誤了
要講的上面都講完了!
回覆刪除其他沒什麼問題
1.是glasses 另外你也可以加上a pair of glasses
回覆刪除2.是Kaohsiung!!
3.She is dressed in white shirt and black skirt, and carried a red handbag when she was missing.
前後時態要一樣!!
我覺得is 要改成was!!
留完之後才發現..好像跟上面的都一樣耶...