Discussing Effects--(2)－revised

  Acton is a small town in the Midwest which has a population of 2,500.  It is a safe, quiet, and clean place to live.  Most of the people have lived in there all their lives and know each other very well.  The town hasn’t changed very much in the past 100 years.  However, Stanley Manufacturing decided to open a large factor in Acton last month, which will bring many immigrants to this community.  Some people are worried about the bad effects of this new factory’s construction on the small town.  Whereas others are excited about the positive impact the new factory will have.  

  In my opinion, it is improper to build a plant in this town and to induce some negative influence.  For example, though the construction brings people lots of working opportunities, it will cause pollution as well.  Smoke voided from the factory fills the sky, the emission of waste water makes the rivers’ or streams’ temperature hotter and hotter, and a large amount of garbage thrown out arbitrarily has an impact on the environment’s pollution.  Another cause is that many immigrants move here to get a job, which will disturb the peace of Acton.  Local residents may feel curious and strange about these non-native people.  In addition, though the population in Acton sharply increases because of people from other places, it will be more crowded and noisy and destroy the tradition’s balance in this small town.  For the dwellers’ consideration, I think the factory had better not be structured in Acton.