Contrasting--(2)－revised

I'm seeking for a new English instructor for my school and I received two resumes from people applying for this job.  One of the applicants is Lynn Whitnall and the other is Debra Fines.  After perusing these resumes, perhaps I will choose Debra Fines to hire.  There are some reasons following.  First of all, compared Lynn Whitnall with Debra Fines in education, Debra is specialized in English whereas Lynn isn’t, who studies in Spanish only.  Second, Debra has over eighteen-year employment experience; however, Lynn has only fourteen years.  Consequently, Debra is more experienced than Lynn.  In addition, although Lynn has ability of the fluency in many languages, such as Spanish, French and Japanese, Debra has the superiority about this job because he is much professional in English.  Last, Lynn Whitnall doesn’t have any publication, but Debra Fines once published a book about English in 2006.  Above these wherefores are why I prefer employing Debra Fines to Lynn Whitnall.