As a student and athlete, I had a lot of busy moments in my school life. Two weeks ago, I had a county race in the gym in Sin-Ying City of Tainan County. Therefore, our coach demanded us to practice. When my classmates were taking exams or studying in the morning, I had to join the track-and-field team, receiving the rigorous training on the playground. During the competition, I was busy participating in sprint races. The competition last for five days, which made me be absent in many classes.
After coming back to my school life, I was busy asking my classmates if there were tests I didn’t take or someone would inform me of something. Not attending class, I had to take make-up exams and take notes on textbooks, such as English, Chinese, Math, and so on. I was so busy doing these that I had no time having leisure recreations. This most busy expenience let me know that I should arrange my time regularly and orderly so that I wouldn't be eventually caught off my guard.
倒數第二行expenience拼錯摟!!
回覆刪除也寫的太好了吧!!
佩服XDD
第七段的"last"是動詞嗎??
回覆刪除是的話要+ed吧~~~
還分成兩段~
回覆刪除寫的讚~
沒意見~我覺得結論句寫的很好
除了expenience錯字之外
回覆刪除找不到什麼缺點了
根本就一級棒
回覆刪除然後結論句超讚!!!
整篇的用字都蠻好的
回覆刪除寫的很讚!!!
注意拼字
回覆刪除寫的不錯喲~
真的將你當時的心情都完全表現出來了呢!