2011年3月12日 星期六

The most busy moment

As a student and athlete, I had a lot of busy moments in my school life.  Two weeks ago, I had a county race in the gym in Sin-Ying City of Tainan County.  Therefore, our coach demanded us to practice.  When my classmates were taking exams or studying in the morning, I had to join the track-and-field team, receiving the rigorous training on the playground.  During the competition, I was busy participating in sprint races.  The competition last for five days, which made me be absent in many classes.
After coming back to my school life, I was busy asking my classmates if there were tests I didn’t take or someone would inform me of something.  Not attending class, I had to take make-up exams and take notes on textbooks, such as English, Chinese, Math, and so on. I was so busy doing these that I had no time having leisure recreations.  This most busy expenience let me know that I should arrange my time regularly and orderly so that I wouldn't be eventually caught off my guard.

7 則留言:

  1. 倒數第二行expenience拼錯摟!!
    也寫的太好了吧!!
    佩服XDD

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  2. 第七段的"last"是動詞嗎??
    是的話要+ed吧~~~

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  3. 還分成兩段~
    寫的讚~
    沒意見~我覺得結論句寫的很好

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  4. 除了expenience錯字之外
    找不到什麼缺點了

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  5. 根本就一級棒
    然後結論句超讚!!!

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  6. 整篇的用字都蠻好的
    寫的很讚!!!

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  7. 注意拼字

    寫的不錯喲~
    真的將你當時的心情都完全表現出來了呢!

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